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		<title>Comment on Audience vs. Speaker by ryanroot</title>
		<link>http://miniexemplars.edublogs.org/2008/03/03/audience-vs-speaker/#comment-4</link>
		<dc:creator>ryanroot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 12:19:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lyrics to Nada Surf's "See These Bones" 


[Everyone's right and no one is sorry
That's the start and the end of this story
From the sharks and the jets
To the call in the morning] X2

And life is just bets anyway

Look alive, see these bones
What you are now, we were once

Try as they might, no one's immune to
Misfiring and acting on the wrong clues
And thinkin' it's time to redo and redo

I feel rain in the movies and the talk before the screen lights
I hear strings in the park
I don't like to call her right, except when its too late at night
I mostly just think in the dark

Look alive, see these bones
What you are now, we were once
Just like we are, you'll be dust

And just like we are, permanent

You were too tired to eat, too hungry to sleep
Just imagine the speed, it's just what you need

Look alive, see these bones
What you are now, we were once
And just like we are, you'll be dust
And just like we are, permanent

The lights in the city are more or less blinking
Which side of the story decides what you're thinking
We'll amount in cold faces?
We're squinting, we're hurrying
We'll take inventory
We're digging, we're burying

Do you remember when the line was blown
Do you remember when it fell
Do you remember when you went to her house, remember ringing the bell

Look alive, see these bones
What you are now, we were once
Just like we are, you'll be dust
Just like we are, permanent'</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lyrics to Nada Surf&#8217;s &#8220;See These Bones&#8221; </p>
<p>[Everyone's right and no one is sorry<br />
That's the start and the end of this story<br />
From the sharks and the jets<br />
To the call in the morning] X2</p>
<p>And life is just bets anyway</p>
<p>Look alive, see these bones<br />
What you are now, we were once</p>
<p>Try as they might, no one&#8217;s immune to<br />
Misfiring and acting on the wrong clues<br />
And thinkin&#8217; it&#8217;s time to redo and redo</p>
<p>I feel rain in the movies and the talk before the screen lights<br />
I hear strings in the park<br />
I don&#8217;t like to call her right, except when its too late at night<br />
I mostly just think in the dark</p>
<p>Look alive, see these bones<br />
What you are now, we were once<br />
Just like we are, you&#8217;ll be dust</p>
<p>And just like we are, permanent</p>
<p>You were too tired to eat, too hungry to sleep<br />
Just imagine the speed, it&#8217;s just what you need</p>
<p>Look alive, see these bones<br />
What you are now, we were once<br />
And just like we are, you&#8217;ll be dust<br />
And just like we are, permanent</p>
<p>The lights in the city are more or less blinking<br />
Which side of the story decides what you&#8217;re thinking<br />
We&#8217;ll amount in cold faces?<br />
We&#8217;re squinting, we&#8217;re hurrying<br />
We&#8217;ll take inventory<br />
We&#8217;re digging, we&#8217;re burying</p>
<p>Do you remember when the line was blown<br />
Do you remember when it fell<br />
Do you remember when you went to her house, remember ringing the bell</p>
<p>Look alive, see these bones<br />
What you are now, we were once<br />
Just like we are, you&#8217;ll be dust<br />
Just like we are, permanent&#8217;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Imagery by ryanroot</title>
		<link>http://miniexemplars.edublogs.org/2008/03/03/imagery/#comment-3</link>
		<dc:creator>ryanroot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 12:06:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Breathe life to the street from the mouth
Those ruby red lips have much to give
Pull life from the land with your capable hands
Those life loving beautiful broken hands
Oh, I'll stand with you and marvel
At the cosmos pink and bright
All the pages flipping backwards
Til time is gone and wrong is right

Rivers running up the hills and to the sky and down to the sea
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me

Sing me a salty blue song, I'll be gone
With watery cheeks down flowered lanes
Tattered sails on a ramshakle ship, I'll go pale
Staring straight in the face looming tempest waves
Otherwise I'll wither and die here
On this reach of rubble rambling
With two years filled up with sand, dear
In a broken daze I'll be scrambling

Like rivers running up the hills and to the sky and down to the sea
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me

Summer sky falling into the sea, taking part of me
See the bones on the sand in the light
All the heards of the sea rushing by, pay no mind
To the dancing reflections gone wild
And at night a fractured star fell
And pierced right through the thick of me
I cried out in pain and joy, yes
I'm not dead, not numb, not withering

Like a falling leaf who keeps her green, I'm turning bright in the sea
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Breathe life to the street from the mouth<br />
Those ruby red lips have much to give<br />
Pull life from the land with your capable hands<br />
Those life loving beautiful broken hands<br />
Oh, I&#8217;ll stand with you and marvel<br />
At the cosmos pink and bright<br />
All the pages flipping backwards<br />
Til time is gone and wrong is right</p>
<p>Rivers running up the hills and to the sky and down to the sea<br />
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me</p>
<p>Sing me a salty blue song, I&#8217;ll be gone<br />
With watery cheeks down flowered lanes<br />
Tattered sails on a ramshakle ship, I&#8217;ll go pale<br />
Staring straight in the face looming tempest waves<br />
Otherwise I&#8217;ll wither and die here<br />
On this reach of rubble rambling<br />
With two years filled up with sand, dear<br />
In a broken daze I&#8217;ll be scrambling</p>
<p>Like rivers running up the hills and to the sky and down to the sea<br />
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me</p>
<p>Summer sky falling into the sea, taking part of me<br />
See the bones on the sand in the light<br />
All the heards of the sea rushing by, pay no mind<br />
To the dancing reflections gone wild<br />
And at night a fractured star fell<br />
And pierced right through the thick of me<br />
I cried out in pain and joy, yes<br />
I&#8217;m not dead, not numb, not withering</p>
<p>Like a falling leaf who keeps her green, I&#8217;m turning bright in the sea<br />
Where a merman with a twinkle casts a hook in me</p>
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		<title>Comment on Allusion and Implication &#38; Inference by ryanroot</title>
		<link>http://miniexemplars.edublogs.org/2008/03/02/barkingbustergmailcom/#comment-2</link>
		<dc:creator>ryanroot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 12:04:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lyrics to first stanza:

Oh, say can you see by the dawn's early light
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight's last gleaming?
Whose broad stripes and bright stars thru the perilous fight,
O'er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming?
And the rocket's red glare, the bombs bursting in air,
Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there.
Oh, say does that star-spangled banner yet wave
O'er the land of the free and the home of the brave?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lyrics to first stanza:</p>
<p>Oh, say can you see by the dawn&#8217;s early light<br />
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight&#8217;s last gleaming?<br />
Whose broad stripes and bright stars thru the perilous fight,<br />
O&#8217;er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming?<br />
And the rocket&#8217;s red glare, the bombs bursting in air,<br />
Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there.<br />
Oh, say does that star-spangled banner yet wave<br />
O&#8217;er the land of the free and the home of the brave?</p>
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